What is one way that the following sentence can be improved with the addition of an adverb?: He cried out for help when he got stuck in the revolving door.

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Answer 1 · 2018-04-30T13:11:32

Adverbs are words that describe verbs, adjectives, or other adverbs. They answer the questions:

$How$ $color(red)"How"$ :
$>$ $>$ softly, loudly, gracefully, well, fast

$Where$ $color(orange)"Where"$ :
$>$ $>$ outside, above, far, indoors, there, abroad

$When$ $color(green)"When"$ :
$>$ $>$ soon, tomorrow, then, today, already

$How much$ $color(blue)"How much"$ :
$>$ $>$ fairly, too, extremely, just, very

$How often$ $color(purple)"How often"$ :
$>$ $>$ never, rarely, often, seldom, frequently

In your sentence I think it would be beneficial to add a $how$ $color(red)"how"$ adverb in the sentence to describe how he yelled:

$Desperately$ $color(red)"Desperately"$ , he cried out for help when he got stuck in the revolving door.
He cried out $loudly$ $color(red)"loudly"$ for help when he got stuck in the revolving door.