What is one way that the following sentence can be improved with the addition of an adverb?: The folder with the incriminating evidence was lying on the table, while the detectives were searching the apartment.
1 Answer
Mar 8, 2018
Nice question.
Explanation:
The folder with the incriminating evidence was lying on the table while the detectives were desperately searching the apartment.
While is a dependent clause that needs not a COMMA by AP style , Of course, the Oxford style can be.