Which sentence make sense?

Legal moralism is when you make something illegal on something that is immoral.

or...

Legal moralism is when you make something illegal that is immoral.

1 Answer
kat
Nov 26, 2017

The second sentence is better. However, if you are writing an essay about legal moralism, this one is better:

Explanation:

Legal moralism is the belief that the level of illegality of an act may cause the act to be criminalized on the basis of its immorality.

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